Correction for the 1st exam

Dear Alice,

I'm really happy that you rote m a letter. Takingdrugs is
really stupid,but let meexplain why before you stop realice. There're many dangers linked
with taking drugs. For example heroin, which you can inject most
of the time, very dangerous becouse ou can get
illnesses like AIDS or other things like that more easily. When you
take heroin you feel at first very good, but afterwards you feel
depresed or very down. You get depenent on it really fast
and then the real troubles begin. You need moremoney to buy
heroin an if you haven't got enough money maybe you bgin
to steal it from other people.

Now I'll tell you some theories why people take drugs and
maybe why Jason wants you to try it! Some people take
drugs because they don't know their effects and want
to know them. You told me that you want to try heroin
because of hat, but thats stupid. I also don't shoot in
my own leg because I don't know the effects! you also told me that
you only want to try it once. Ok that sounds good, but
there are so much drug addicts out there who also said
the same. Now to Jason, I think
he could be an "evil pusher". Those are people who push
you to try a drug and then when you're addicted sell them at
a high profit.

My advice to you is do't try any drugs because they are
too dangerous and of what I told you in the letter.
I predict that Jason will become an addict, unhappy an he may commit suicide!
So please, don't take drugs!

Yours, Maximilian.